Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Style

The horse trotted in
With a dainty clip clop
Dust sent spinning
In neat rings
Pearly drops clung to its brow

The lid presses down
On a gathering warmth
The spout arches tortuously outward
Vapour has dimmed the swollen,
Scalding surface.

2 comments:

Shalmi said...

yes. much clearer now. but only because you said so.

Shalmi said...

there there. not completely.