Friday, November 27, 2009

Scratch The Surface

So sophisticated,
For I hold my luggage
Fingers lightly hooked.

A little anxious-
Should you pull?
I will clasp.
Should you tug?
Then I'll clench.
And see those fists of steel.\


p.s-Acha,for clarification the should you is to be read as in case you.Otherwise it makes not a darned bit of sense.

4 comments:

Shalmi said...

This is about the pretense of not giving a damn, right?

Right?

Bibo said...

I do think that p.s. was unnecessary. However, loved the piece.

joey said...

@Bibo-Nice to know.

Not that it matters but do i know you?

Bibo said...

@Joey - No, not really. I am a friend of Anweshas. Happened to stumble upon your blog from her list. You have some of the most dark, yet curious writing going. Almost... well, almost lyrical, in a certain sense. A personal connotation, probably.